Alone

[Undine Caddaya]

Undine sat alone on the stage. A spot light left on by what must have been accident was shining down on her. It casted a misty glow around the room. The whole club was dark except the stage. She didn't see anyone in the darkness and mist all around her.

Undine walked over to a microphone which was too left on. She turned the volume down so itr wasn't too loud. She closed her eyes, holding back tears.
dad.....where are you?

"You don't remember me, but I remember you.
I lie awake and try so hard not to think of you.
But who can decide what they dream?
And dream I do...

I believe in you,
I'll give up everything just to find you...
I have to be with you,
To live, to breathe,
You're taking over me...

Can you know what I know and all we have.
You saw me mourning my love for you and touched my hand.
I knew you loved me then.

I believe in you,
I'll give up everything just to find you...
I have to be with you,
To live, to breathe,
You're taking over me...

I look in the mirror and see your face,
If I look deep enough.
So many things inside that just frighten you,
Are taking over...

I believe in you,
I'll give up everything just to find you...
I have to be with you,
To live, to breathe,
You're taking over me...
You're taking over me...

(Taking over me...)
You're taking over me
(Taking over me...)
Taking over me!"

Udine wiped her tears as they started pouring from her eyes and down her cheeks. Her black mascara ran. Her tears ran down her neck and to her hands.
why did he have to go.....


ooc:the yellow text seriously bugs me!

[Edward Elric]

Ed was in the night club, listening to the young girls voice. Thoughts ran about, why was she crying?
After she fininshed her toutching song, everyone left.
Ed walked up and sat next to her,

"Tears coming from a such a woman of superioity isnt such a pleasant mannor, Undine." He said with a nice tone in his voice. He looked his friend with running mascara

"You seemed to have lost someone dear to you, might I be of assistance? Would you care to talk about it?"he asked,
"Pleeease Undine?" he added with puppy eyes

[Undine Caddaya]

Dammit....I didn't think anyone was here in this darkness.....
Undine just nodded and sat down on the edge of the stage.

"Sure..."she mumbled. She wiped her eyes, red from crying. Undine looked up at Ed as if telling him to sit.



ooc: sry 4 the single linning-i g2g
undine-"god...I didn't think he was even smart enough to know words like superiority!"

[Edward Elric]

ooc: LOL- same here for the single lining
bic:
Ed sat next to her, waiting for her to begin her tale that led her to cry

[Undine Caddaya]

Undine tried to hold back the ears that kept comming. She started off slowly.
"When I was just a kid-my Dad left us. He was taken to the darkside and he's never comming back! I've been searching everywhere and that's how I ended up here. The guy...thing who took him-the Atrox, gave me my pendant. Te pendant brought out my true powers and made me a true angel. When my Mom died-her final wish was for me to bring back Dad. Now I don't think I'm ever going to find him."

[Edward Elric]

Ed took her hand,
"Come on, I know where we can talk about this easier."
he said, hopping off hte stage.

(i have horrible writers block!)

[Undine Caddaya]

oco: lol me 2
bic:
Undin nodded and hopped off.
"Thanks Ed."

[Edward Elric]

Ed smiled at her.
"Its no problem!" He said, giving a peace sign with his fingers.

As Ed guided her off the stage, he took her outside, then walked a block to a nearby bench- it was as if it was cast away from everything. It was funny. Ed found this bench cause one night he was too tired to walk to the inn, so he collapsed here instead. It was alomst invisable unless you know where it is. Ed took a seat, and pretty much gave Undine the "YAY SIT NEXT TO ME" face.

With his hands behind his head, he took a breath after Undine sat down and said,
"Soooooooooo. Where were we?" he asked


(((OOC: after all this time i still dont know wtc to post...)))

[Undine Caddaya]

ooc: lol yeah i don't remember either!
bic:
Undine followed Ed to the well-concealed bench. It was old, but that didn't much matter. She sat down next to Ed, whiping her eyes, holding back the flow.

"They were friends..."Undine said quietly,"my dad and Atrox. Atrox often spoke to me about angels and magic. I never payed much attention to him though. I just kinda figured he was weird or something. But then my dad was starting to act like him too. He old me stories every night of an angel with blue wings with an evil secret. Then I just thought it was a story. But it all turned out to be so real....too real..."
Undine stopped, looking up at Ed to see if he was still listening. Of corse, he was. Looking back down, Undine twiddled he fingers insecurely.
"Then one day....h came to my house. My father had bags in his hands, and just walked out. Atrox came to me and gave me a clear pendant. He put it around ,y neck and said 'I trust you will take care of this. It will awaken your true power.' At the time, I had no clue what he meant, but I was more wondering when Dad just walked out withouit saying good bye. But then, as I stood at the door calling to him, I saw why. Atrox followed him out to he street. I remember seeing two black figures in the dim light, one with a black object in his hand. Then, I saw the other take something out of his pocket. It gleame in the light, and I saw what it was..."

Undine paused, taking a breath."It was a knife..." The tears returning, she couldn't bring herself tosaywhat happened next. No, it wasn't death, but something...something worse in the eyes of a young girl.

[Edward Elric]

Ed understood what the basic story was- but he didnt understand the Atrox- or whoever/whatever he was.

"I don't know what to say. That feeling has to be terrible."

Kind of like when me and Al burned down our home when we left for the philosopher's stone....

"But umm, who is the Atrox guy?" he said- confused with this face: -.o

Ed noticed that Undine was starting to cry. As a friend, he wiped away one of the forming tears.

"Hey, even though your infront of a friend, its ok to cry." He said reassuringly.


(((OOC: omg im like still musedead on this post- probably cause i suck at roleplaying as Ed)))))

[Undine Caddaya]

Undine smiled at Ed's kindness, whiping her tears away, but this did not much help. Sure she had one of her dear friends with her, but she still felt so lonely.
"Atrox..."Undine said, trying to toughin up,"is what I'd define as the ultumate evil, I guess. His spirit is supposively and apparantly is also the more alluring evil being that there is. Well, I'm not sureif he's the evilest, but he makes the highest on my list. He attracts followers...unsuspecting people, everage people. He gets them in different ways. Some he befriends, some he tortures, some he outwits. Many of his followers are from ancient times, doomed yet blessed to immortality.
"Supposedly there is no way to save them...the folowers...but I don't think thats true. Part of them, no matter how small, alway will thrive...sometimes unknowingly, on the darknes and power brought to them by Atrox. But my idea is that if they were shown the light, taken back from the evil, they could once again be free."
Undine looked up to Ed, who had an ' I'm trying so hard to pay attention but I'm confused' face.
"Sorry...I'm goin too fast, aren't I?"
ooc: oh...i joined that HP site as Sabine Rose....do u know if i have to enroll?